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Broken dreams, a shallow heart,
Wings of innocence torn apart,
Caught in a moment, but out of time,
Life’s a song that just doesn’t rhyme,
Selfish wants, purity’s destruction,
Snared in the wildfire of needy seduction,
National suicide, greed became lust,
Having to lie in order to trust,
Nightmare, wide awake,
Watching society burn at the stake,
Shattered faith, gone with yesterday,
Back before “love” was a cliché,
Light inverted, shadows lead,
Growth is faster with a tainted seed,
Destiny, approaching fast,
In a race where all come last,
Apparitions, icy chills,
Blaming ghosts for making the kills,
Breaking silence, whispering screams,
Accepting everything as it first seems,
Ignorance, we brought this on,
Then were surprised when all hope was gone.
©2008-2009 =FlatlineOnSteroids
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Yay, no more writer's block! ( For now )
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:icondreshanda:
Boo, i still have writers block! DX

Though, great poem! Dreshie like! ^^

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You are fantastic!


This is fantastic!

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:iconflatlineonsteroids:
Aw I hope you get over yours, I'll probably be in another one in a week, or before I can write again =S
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Thank you very much, I always appreciate your opinions :salute:
:icondreshanda:
Heh, I think we all are like that...

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you are such inspiration to me... i wish i was good of a poet as you

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i hope you don't know what i want to mean to you.
:iconraikota:
Beautiful. The words flowed easily and intelligently. Very nice.

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Thank you, I'm glad you think so =]
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It takes a lot of practice & hard work, anyone can become an amazing poet if they really want to, & I get the feeling you will.
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that kicked, so much ass. I feel that way, although I'm not inept enough to put it that elogantly on paper.

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