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She tells it all when she’s drunk,
Truth coming out with tears,
Showing how low she’s sunk,
Drowning in wasted years,

Wishing on stars long since fallen,
Slipping on her old lies,
She regrets ignoring her calling,
Seeing through unfocused eyes,

She could have been a model,
She should have went to college,
It doesn’t take a therapist to tell,
She’s been thrown off the edge,

Stuck in this town with her time,
Living for the end of the day,
She searches the bottom of her glass,
For some relief from the pain,

Its not living, just existing,
A cage without a door,
And if someone were to listen,
They’d see she can’t take anymore.
Well, this was one of the poems I wanted to post.

I hope no one is disappointed.
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5-of-4 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2008
an incredable poem
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FlatlineOnSteroids Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2008
Thank you so much :D
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5-of-4 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2008
your welcome
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SlowlyDisintegrating Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2008
I like the begining the best. Its very well done.
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:iconflatlineonsteroids:
FlatlineOnSteroids Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2008
Thank you very much :]
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SlowlyDisintegrating Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2008
You're welcome!
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PAPAWINDY Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
tha would be pretty ace as a song :)
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FlatlineOnSteroids Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2008
Yeah? I'm glad you think so, unfortunately I cannot sing.
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