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Walking home alone one night,
I must have been an innocent sight,
For in a second, more or less,
He decided to render me helpless,
My rapist, my nightmare,
The one who took me right there,
The man who laughed in my face,
Who, when told to stop, sped up the pace,
He’d shredded my best clothes with a knife,
And left me with a hate for life,
Closed the gap between girl and women,
And made separate worlds of now and then,
This man, he committed such a painful crime,
Taking away a choice that should be mine,
That night, etched in my memory like stone,
Gave me such a phobia of being alone,
Right now it feels like I could never go out again,
And I swear the devil was smirking behind the face of that man,
But truly, the deprived victim of this tragedy,
Will be the child of my teenage pregnancy,
His life will be an endless lie,
When I tell him of heroics in which his father 'died',
He’ll be proud, missing the person he never had,
And he’ll suffer, growing up without a dad.
©2008-2009 =FlatlineOnSteroids
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Author's Comments

I was thinking about rape.. & Came up with this, I hope you understand the concept.

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:iconteela-y:
I am beginning to see what type of poet you are; an excellent one.

Your poem gets into my mind, and body... I am put onto a helpless roller coaster, and your words steer me through. Thank you. This poem has made me fear, nearly cry, and I have to tell you that you are very talented.

Thank you for writing this. Despite it's sad subject, your beautiful writing has made my night.
:iconflatlineonsteroids:
I'm glad, if I could change just one person's view on a subject, then I have succeeded.

& No, thank -you- for giving me the honour of having done just that.
:iconwildflower6126:
thats really good. it actually makes me think of how i would feel if i were raped.

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:iconflatlineonsteroids:
Good, thanks.

& I hope you never do get raped.
:iconwildflower6126:
same to u. it seems really scary, thinking about that.

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:blackrose: No One is perfect. I am No One. These are both true facts. Therefore I must be perfect. :blackrose:
:rose: Who likes Rihanna? Anyone? ANYONE?! :rose:
[link] watch watch! It’s so funny!
:D FUNNY!
:iconcosplayme:
This is an amazing piece, the way you put yourself in that horrible position and wrote it as if it had happened to you. And the that the way the poem ends makes you wonder about the child.
:iconflatlineonsteroids:
Thanks, I'm glad you appreciate it & could see that.
I think it's something that people need to pay more attention to.
:iconcosplayme:
your very welcome, keep up the great writing.
:iconteela-y:
It was my pleasure. :)

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